ENGAGED IN MUTILATING - NEW SONG IDEA (ROUGH)

ENGAGED IN MUTILATING, writing new material for their second coming album. The song is rough, and needs work, its just a foundation idea (no vox, no 2nd guitars, nor solos) We would like some feedback from the fans.. whats wrong with it? is it catchy enough? whats missing? etc. etc. we posted this for the fans to hear.. hope yall enjoy! PLEASE NO NEGATIVE COMMENTS thank you!